RE: STEEMIT HAIKU CONTEST # WEEK 13: (Original Contest)

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STEEMIT HAIKU CONTEST # WEEK 13: (Original Contest)

in contest •  7 years ago 


Ocean and sky is gray
Who took the blue color away?
Give it back, I say

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Welcome, @bagzbunny12
Very nice poem, we liked it... but this is not a Haiku.
It has too many syllables. Please check