RE: STACH Short Story Contest #26: 199 words, 5 winners, 15SB prize pool!

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STACH Short Story Contest #26: 199 words, 5 winners, 15SB prize pool!

in contest •  7 years ago 

He couldn't Fill Himself

Pat is a lonely boy.

He would always ask the clouds why he always feel that way.
One day he decided to hang-out with his pals. And there he sees himself wanting to just go home.
He sees the people that love him, yet he still feel alone.

He wanted something else but he couldn’t figure it out. He kept on praying for an answer. But he realized he doesn’t have a question. “What was it he wanted?” Or “What it is he needed” He still needs to decide.

But today, he knew, if he couldn’t fill himself with a dash of joy, he will save more.

Here's my entry, hope you like it. :)

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