RE: Finish the story, earn 3 steembasicincome shares + SBD! Week #4

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Finish the story, earn 3 steembasicincome shares + SBD! Week #4

in contest •  7 years ago  (edited)

Interesting! Thanks for your contribution @alale. I purpose you this alternative ending: after that encounter he cannot bear it anymore and kills himself, falling in the cold water of the Grand Channel, drowning right as his daughter did time before. His sense of guilt overwhelming him. When he's there falling down in the frozen and dark green water, before loosing conscience he feels Annabelle's hand grabbing his one.."come with me, Dad".

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