RE: STACH Short Story Contest #23: 199 words, 5 winners, 15SBD prize pool!

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STACH Short Story Contest #23: 199 words, 5 winners, 15SBD prize pool!

in contest •  7 years ago 

Everyone judges me for not wanting to go back to school, but I know that if they knew my reasons they would think twice. One afternoon my dad forgot to pick me up after school, so I just sat in front of one of the benches there. The hours passed and nothing came for me dad. Then it was when I saw that so horrible, the sky began to darken suddenly, not as if it were going to be night, but another kind of darkness, I felt fear and I wanted them to come quickly to look for me, but then something worse happened, the sky was totally red, it opened and I saw some decency inside the school, I wanted to run but my feet were paralyzed, I could see how that thing got bigger every time. At that time my dad appeared and I had not noticed that everything was normal around me so I did not want to tell him what I had seen. I feel that my school is dominated by that evil being that fell from the red sky.

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