Finish the Fiction Story (week 9)

in contest •  7 years ago 

I think I have to admit, to being addicted to this story now. It is amazing to see the ending pieces, written by other writers. This weeks script is by @marcoricarrdi. Come check it out, and let your imagination take you to another dimension.
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The Script

Damarthy is the paradoxical remnant of a gigantic megalopolis from Shintiara’s future. It is perhaps the greatest singularity of the whole planet.
A well-known saying in Shintiara goes: “If you don’t know what time you’re in, you certainly know where you are: Damarthy, the most ancient city of the future.”

The few that have overcome the difficulties of the intricate Canyons of Wind tell of a vast city with enormous glass buildings and inhabited by rough, primitive men.
These natives most likely live in the shelter of futuristic metal superstructures, the origins of which they don’t comprehend, which they nonetheless exploit to make simple tools and weapons by detaching fragments from them.

Mighty redwoods claim their living space, erupting from cracked cement and rising upwards as if in challenge to the artificial constructions.
This great vertical forest that invades every part of the city is home to different types of wild animals that contend for territory with the native populations.

There are some who swear that a mysterious sect of hyperhumans hides in the ruins, people who have evolved their bodies so unnaturally that they have completely changed into machines, but in the process they have lost their souls…

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XOO-711 doesn't know how he knew exactly where to find Mack and his family, but 10 years after he killed Neina and Zek, he went through the paradox and landed in their field. He looked in the kitchen window and saw Bryon building some sort of robot. As he watched, he noticed it looked exactly like him. XOO thinks to himself, "damn it, I'm too late!" After seeing that, he went to hide until they went to bed. In the middle of the night, he picked the door lock, and went about inspecting the teddy before destroying it. He took out the microchip and placed it inside himself.

After years went by, Byron planned a trip through the paradox, and enter the city of Damarthy, with the idea coming from XOO. But first, XOO felt it was time to "upgrade" Dr. Byron. He talked Byron into placing a microchip in his brain. XOO was perfectly capable of doing the operation. After all, Byron built him to do anything. XOO needed to see if the chip was going to work, before making more. When he felt Byron was ready, they entered the paradox.

They entered the gates of Damarthy. Upon arrival, the half human, half robots, aimed their weapons, demanding to know who they were.

"You damned fools, this is the infamous Dr. Arioch. You'd be wise to let us enter. He is the inventor of our future!"

At that, they stepped aside. XOO and Byron walked through the gates. Out of the corner of his eye, XOO saw shadows of strange beings, hiding in the trees. Byron must have seen them too, but he did not panic. His eyes however, began to show a red dot. With a smirk, XOO knew it would be a matter of time. He does not plan to kill this "infamous scientist." He has much, much better plans.

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Nasty little teddy bear! I wonder if he plans to use Dr. Byron Arioch to fight the primitive people of Damarthy

Lol, I wonder the same thing. He started off as a cute teddy, but he was very deceiving.

The suspence about Xoo and his secret agenda continues! You left me wondering a lot.. why they wanted to visit Damarthy? The picture is so original btw 😁 Thanks for this following my friend!

Oh I don't think Byron would have gone there, had XOO not conned him into it. But I'm betting he plans to make more AI's or something.

First to comment😊

Then comment! Yours is not a real one. Why don't you read her good work and say something about it, that's how it works..

:) <3 <3