breakfast delicious pancakes
makes day so blessed
Thanks be to God
RE: VDux Haiku Contest -- SOUL TRAIN!
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VDux Haiku Contest -- SOUL TRAIN!
VDux Haiku Contest -- SOUL TRAIN!
breakfast delicious pancakes
makes day so blessed
Thanks be to God
Hey nice haiku! But for this contest all entries have to use 5-7-5 format -- 5 syllables first line 7 syllables second line, 5 syllables third line. For fairness, so all contestants have the same rules. Can you revise?
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