New: imagismAll contenthive-129948hive-196917krsteemhive-166405hive-180932photographyhive-183959hive-183397hive-150122zzanhive-185836hive-188619hive-144064hive-184714uncommonlabhive-101145hive-103599hive-193186bitcoinhive-145157hive-138689hive-139150hive-109690hive-103393TrendingNewHotLikersjocelynlily (52)in poetry • 6 years agosteemCreated with Sketch.Poem: DELETEDDELETEDjocelynlily (52)in writing • 7 years agoUnfounded jealousy and rageTime! I wish I had an infinite amount; but without limitations it would be as precious. Perhaps the lack of time compels us to make use of it better. I'm more often squandering my time than filling…jocelynlily (52)in poetry • 7 years agoTeenage girl working at a gym counterTwo hours later on the public family bathroom toilet wiping my crotch with coarse paper before I wash my hands I shake my head at how wide I opened my mouth in smile, how large my eyes went…jocelynlily (52)in poetry • 7 years agoWinter BedI’ll wrap blankets around me folding excess between my knees. Your kindness hugs me warmer; Your hands hold me in. I’ll nestle deep in covers, pushing into soft stuff pillows. Your body…yuyito (43)in writing • 7 years agoWHY? (ORIGINAL POEM)In the blue garden of my dreams a man is asleep, his hands They rummaged in the nest of my gray hair. Why do your traces rummage through my senses? and slide in my thoughts? the sense of time…jocelynlily (52)in writing • 7 years agoPounded by Ezra: Write in fear; hump the image like a dog on a leg."Go in fear of abstractions. Don’t retell in mediocre verse what has already been done in good prose. Don’t think any intelligent person is going to be deceived when you try to shirk all the…jocelynlily (52)in writing • 7 years agoPounded by Ezra: trite, cliche, and boring; aiming at the object."Don’t use such an expression as “dim lands of peace.” It dulls the image. It mixes an abstraction with the concrete. It comes from the writer’s not realizing that the natural object is always the…
