Beyond grammar and punctuation, paragraphs are fairly important. At times, I see you could do something like:
instead of simply putting each line on a separate line. Pretty much, it should (but doesn't have to each and every time) read like a book, a magazine article, etc. There are many spots where I've seen that you can do this. I think it would read much more smoothly. Maybe you are doing it on purpose, in which case, please, do enlighten me as to what you are doing.
I write every line in a separate line only break it off if it off if it comes to rhyming
If you see it that way, I don't, it has to do with the app/ste I posted it with and you read it with. I write it in the notes of my phone first and copy paste it and post. I do exactly the same with it on WordPress and it does not look that way here or there as far as I can see. Each post of mine is edited many times and I keep doing that if I see strange things or mistakes.
I am a mo e user only and can not avoid this.
I seethe same ugly ness I I try to read posts written by others. I can not read schedules, tables, etc.
The only thing I van do is give up on this contest and that's what I will do.
This platform is not mobile phone user-friendly and I van seldom use Steemit.com or Steempeak or esteem appts post with. Writing is hard because - if I can load these apps/dites at all - it can hardly be seen. The letters are simply too small.
Thank you for letting me know and good luck with your contest.
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I didn't mean to scare you away. I'm sad to see you go. I hope that you will return. I do like reading what you post here.
May you be well.
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@tristancarax you didn't scare me away but made clear what no one did. My post looks messy and its not worth 2-3 days work.
I always write it in the same way only the app I use is different.
I see a lot of posts that look messy to me, I can not read because 2/3 goes on outside my screen and I do not want to post like that.
I wish you good luck with your contest. No hard feelings. 💕
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