We meet in the Grocery Store: Bad dating message --- and you wonder why you're single

Hmm. Activeleash - from OKcupid . Let's count the ways why this message would get deleted after the first sentence.
Hello there - very impersonal - almost comes off as a paste and glue. Basic punctuation expluded from the sentence. This is a red flag for a basic education does not pay nor care to pay attention to detail. In each cases it translates to sooner or later he will not care. He must have majored in Study Hall. The third sentence if you say no to him be gets it, but don't say no and again, he kills every rule of Grammar within half a sentence. He then agrees with himself by answering himself, telling himself he is a straight forward person, which means - he's not. If he was, why tell him. Avoid Ash like dater. Oh by the way - Happy New Year.....I am your 2016 disaster.