My Last First Kiss From You.
I can still recall the scented summer breeze that filled the night-time air
And in my mind, vividly clear, I can see you standing there.
The willow leaves swayed back and forth, as if dancing to a tune
To the rhythm these beating hearts, and the pining of the moon.
You drew me close, I breathed you in, the yearning was severe,
There was no doubt in my mind that my love for you was blatantly sincere.
Then as our lips, in firm embrace slowly intertwined,
I could feel each perfect moment of that night, engraved into my mind.
My soul cried out to touch your heart amidst passionate soft sighs
Interrupted only by the moments when, we got lost within each other’s eyes.
Nightly hours stumbled on, while you crept deeper ‘neath my skin
And with no will left to resist, I had to let you in.
We fell asleep in each other’s arms against starlit willow bark
So, came the end to that love-struck night, and Kissing in the dark.
Now remnants left of youth and spring, still at that dancing branches hides,
For the luminescent morning sun exposed to me, your absence by my side.
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I’ve never been much into romance but this is a really beautiful piece, Well done @breezin
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Well it is not all that romantic really. But thank you TRG - I appreciate the support, this was an old piece that I wrote for a competition and decided to record.
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Yeah great stuff..
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Thanks so much - and thanks for the resteem!
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Great poem @breezin! Reg in my kraal! Thank you for sharing. I will see if I can play it tonight.
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Thank you hope - and if all goes well I will be able to make the show tonight as well for a change.
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Lovely poetry @breezin a romantic at heart.
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haha - I have my moments
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Well it gave me a 'semi' so you must be doing something right...
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A broken heart gives you a semi...? hmmmm - interesting
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Nice kiss
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haha thanks
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