Another Original Song-"Florida"

in dsound •  7 years ago 



Florida is quite a place. Some people love it, and others hate it, but a bunch of people end up there for a lot of different reasons. In this song it represents about the only safe place for two outlaws who are desperately trying to get there after a botched attempt of stealing from their own boss. Whether or not they make it is up to you to decide, but I certainly hope they’ll be okay.

The layers in this song get a little crazy, but it sure was fun to record, and singing it makes me want to get out of town, especially during these cold Ohio winters. I hope you all enjoy this dark little ballad.

Thanks again to @DSound, and to all of you for your comments and support.

*Photo from Pixabay

Lyrics:
Baby we've gotta up and leave this town
Find a new place and let the dust settle down
And if his Charlie and those boys ever come around
We'll send them up to Jesus
Cause we've got a gun but we might need another
I can buy one real cheap from my brother
And we can always look out for each other
From here until the end

And we've gotta get to Florida
I know of a place we can go and fit right in
Gotta get to Florida
Leave behind all the cold and snow for a southern wind

It's been a long road and a longer curse
And somebody got to that money first
And I know things are bad but they could be worse
At least we're still breathing
Cause we both know Charlie don't mess around
Remember that body in the dumpster and the other one they found
In the bottom of the river at the edge of town
It wasn't a pretty picture

And we've gotta get to Florida
I know of a place we can go and fit right in
Gotta get to Florida
Leave behind all the cold and snow for a southern wind

Now you're blaming me and I'm blaming you
And we can both blame each other 'til our faces are blue
But this ain't gonna help us to make it through
To live to see tomorrow
We can argue later about a better plan
But you are my woman and I'm still your man
And we can drive and drive right across the land
Like we always said we would

And we've gotta get to Florida
I know of a place we can go and fit right in
Gotta get to Florida
Leave behind all the cold and snow for a southern wind

Now this old town has had its place
But it's mostly gonna leave a bitter taste
There's no time to reflect, no time to waste
No time to see your mama
My buddy from the army still lives on his moat
And he always said I could have his second boat
And I'll learn I'll learn how to keep it afloat
And those locals they won't say nothin'

And we've gotta get to Florida
I know of a place we can go and fit right in
Gotta get to Florida
Leave behind all the cold and snow for a southern wind


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I’m a fan. Particularly of all the redundancy and flourishes I’m detecting in the layered vocals ;). And also for taking the panhandle/“Florida Man” view instead of the glitz-and-beaches perspective on the Sunshine State.

Ha! There we go again! I'm glad someone noticed the different perspective. I think there's a lot more to Florida...

Congrats mate..
I wish i can go to florida one day

Hopefully it's under better circumstances than these two!

Hey, nice song. Make me so peacefull ! I like it !

This is great. Thank you!

You knew how to balance emotions very well in that song

Thanks!

I am from florida --- and I LOVE the vibe of this song!!
Thank you for sharing -- hope it soars!

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Heres a photo I took on Fischer Island in Miami 2016

This is great to know! Beautiful picture!

Good post you fren. I share

Thanks!

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Harika çok beğendim

Teşekkür ederim!

when the cool music meets the soft lyrics. Great song. And greetings from Turkey :)

Teşekkür ederim! (And greetings to you!)

Never been in Florida but your song makes me feel like i've always lived there! Love the tale represented in the song, good job! can't wait to hear the recordings!
Cheers mate :)

I'm glad you like the tale. Cheers to you!

I expect to hear it playing in the radio soon....congrats to you. Am following you too. one upvote to ya!!

Thank you so much!

Great story song, nice picking, like the build at the end on the chorus.

Thank you @stevee.

Great Track, don't know how you pump out track after track with such fab quality.

Thanks @kryptoe. I've had some extra time lately to write and it's been a blast!

  ·  7 years ago (edited)

This song is AWESOME ! Gerçekten harika bir şarkı olmuş çok beğendim. Takipte kalacağım :)

Teşekkür ederim!

Awesome song! Great seeing another talented Ohioan here.

Thank you, and for the resteems!

Good song man! One upvote from me. How has Steemit been for promoting your work so far? I have some friends I'd like to bring into the space.

So far it has been pretty great in terms of meeting so many new people, and I'm now sharing these posts as new songs, and some "stories behind the songs on facebook and twitter, and it's starting to pick up momentum there as well. Plus it's helped me to be more disciplined to spend a few hours every day working on writing/recording so I have something worthwhile to share.

Thank you Daniel! I am more a California Fan but you make Florida sounds so cool! :)

Thanks. I'll post a song about California soon!

absolutely fantastic performance... congrats ! i can listen again and again..

I'm glad you enjoy it. Thanks!

Nice song man! makes me feel some kind of way i cant really describe! great music

Thanks @cjsound

Awesome song, heard this 10 times in a row :) Keep it up with your nice music 🎸.

Danke! Es freut mich dass es Dir so gut gefallen hat!