Last December

elainefaye (57) in dsound • 7 years ago (edited)

Hey Dsound fam!

This particular jam is about... well being in a relationship with someone for so long that you kind lose yourself. And when the relationship ends, you can't quite remember who you are as a person away from the person you've dedicated so much of your life to. It's a pretty weird life space to be in... so I wrote a song about it ;) Hope you guys dig it!

Peace and Love fam!

~Last December~

I'm not ready to move on but I can sit here any longer not sure I was before you
Truth is like a broken mirror I can't piece together reflecting things that I'm not used to yeah

I'm not ready to move on but I can sit here any longer not sure I was before you
The truth is like a broken mirror I can't piece together reflecting things that I'm not used to

Oh I, I remember last December I said I wouldn't end up like the others

Oh I'm, Trying to remember life before us
What I believed I believed oh I'm
Trying to remember life before love
When I believed in I believed in something

I close my eyes and picture things that I can not see with my own eyes vision alludes me every time
The vision of a memory of a person that I used to be
Before our love traded truth for lies

Oh I, I remember last December I said I wouldn't end up like the others no
I, I'd remember where I came from but now, I, can't see my face

Oh I'm, Trying to remember life before us
What I believed I believed oh I'm
Trying to remember life before love
When I believed in I believed in something

When did I stop believing the things that I been dreaming lines cross I can't see them
All these tears that I've cried day by how I've tried when did I stop believing
When did I stop believing, when did I stop dreaming, when did I stop breathing

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7 years ago by elainefaye (57)

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seveaux (60) · 7 years ago

i am completely blown away
and that is rare i must say but wow

haikubot (54) · 7 years ago

I am completely
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I must say but wow

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seveaux (60) · 7 years ago (edited)

i googled haiku
never stood still at this
but it's awesome..

elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago

Thank you so much Seveaux!! That means so much to me!!

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tygertyger (65) · 7 years ago

Love your voice :)

elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago

Thank you!! <3

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onetin84 (62) · 7 years ago

You were chosen for my 🎧 DSound TOP5! 🎧 on Sunday - Thank You!

elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago

Amazing!! Thank you so much!!!

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simgirl (61) · 7 years ago

Awesome song!!!

elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago

Thanks babe!!

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davidfar (70) · 7 years ago

amazing :)) I enjoyed listening to vocal lines and the track was really awesome \m/ Rock on

elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago

Thank you so much!! I really appreciate that!!

k0wsk1 (63) · 7 years ago

Really nice work, do you do your own production / where do you record?

elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago

Thank you! Not really, I have friends who help me out with production usually.

elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago

And I usually just use my own home set up for vocals or a friends. I don't really go into a studio unless I need to have live drums tracked these days. Saves me some money $$

k0wsk1 (63) · 7 years ago

Right on, that's the way to go! Maybe one day with success here you can go to a studio every time... Keep up the good work :)

elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago

Hopefully!! Thanks you!!

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ivan.atman (64) · 7 years ago

@elainefaye Oh this is gooood!

elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago

Thanks home slice!!!

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yidneth (67) · 7 years ago

Great vocals and production!

elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago

Thanks lady!! <3

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yidneth (67) · 7 years ago

Oh my you are welcomed :) and also congrats on the wonderful first open mic entry :) that was brilliant :). We've coincided at the needle :). Lovely voice!

elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago

Thank you Yidneth!!

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farizalm (62) · 7 years ago

Nice

elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago

Thanks!!

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artzone (67) · 7 years ago

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elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago

Thank you @artzone!!

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alao (64) · 7 years ago

This song is awesome!!!

elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago

Thank you!!

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junkfeathers (55) · 7 years ago

This one really connected with me! Excellent. I was in a ten year relationship that left me feeling like I couldn't sing or write lyrics. Plus, we shared the same birthday....in December! You're an excellent songwriter!

elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago

It's crazy how a relationship can do that to you. And thank you so much! That means a bunch to me!! <3

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whymonkey (61) · 7 years ago

Outstanding production! Awesome vocals, nice build up, good instrumentation and I like how that drums take the spotlight some times

elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago

Thank you so much!!

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sunravelme (62) · 7 years ago

Loved this! It's crazy how the lyrics capture the emotion perfectly, and I love the almost country twang in your voice!

elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago

Thank you so much! That's such a great compliment! I try to write in a way that really captures all the emotion I'm feeling at the time. That's the first time I've heard that about the country twang... makes sense though because I veer a bit folk side at times. Thanks again for taking the time to listen!!

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falseyedols (60) · 7 years ago

Doooooooope!!!! Not sure who does your production work but it's always on point as well. I wouldn't mind hearing your voice on a Falseyedols beat ;)

elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago (edited)

Ayyyye!! Thanks you!! I went to a music school so I fortunately have a network of people to help me with production. I'm down to jump on a track!! I'm super busy through the end of next week and then lets make it happen!!

web-gnar (60) · 7 years ago

rocking!

elainefaye (57) · 7 years ago

Thanks!!

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