Sound Legion - Never Ending Story (New Original Song)

Original Song: Never Ending Story
Producer: Sven "Qrittix" Driesen @qrittix
Singer Songwriter: Shavon Bonnie Legion
Sound Legion Collaborative Artist Music House

This is a piano ballad poetry track. Something fresh to add just a little bit more depth to the new album getting finished up by producer @qrittix and myself. Let us know what you guys think of this one, there are some interesting change ups in the track to really build a mood of a sound piece.

Lyrics

Inch by inch I crawl,
breath by breath to move this wall,
with eyes like a tiger you want me to see you,
with all your convictions you want me to be you,

step by step I fall,
painting dragons against the wall,
you see the fire and you think it will burn you,
and I want the words to somehow unlearn you,

but this is how it goes,
this is how i know,
this is our, never ending story,
this is all I know
this is all they've shown,
in our never ending story

inch by inch I crawl,
breath by breath to move this wall,
with eyes like an angel you want me to see you,
with all your convictions should I believe you,

step by step I fall,
painting monsters against the wall,
you see the darkness and you think it will get you
you think that the light will somehow forget you

but this is how it goes
this is how I know
this is our never ending story
this is all I know
this is all they've shown
in our never ending story

Poem
Can I bridge the light from night to day,
can I walk the path without dismay,
will I travel boundries?
may I travel far,
may I see new horizons with morning star,

Free me the dreamer into the color of each new day,
that I may dance the rhythm of sound and manifest
beauty in my forever,
on the path of my never ending story.

A sprinkle of hope,
a dash of courage
and dont forget to smile

Dance in a feeling
swirl it up
and set it free

Thanks for listening
Shavon Bonnie Legion
Sven Qrittix Driesen

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Wow.

I loved this particular verse

"step by step I fall,
painting dragons against the wall,
you see the fire and you think it will burn you,
and I want the words to somehow unlearn you"

Combining poetry and music? Wow! Such talent is rare.

Great piece I must say @soundlegion

thank you very very much I really appreciate the thoughtful comment I am so glad you like the piece

I don't know why, I felt sad when I heard the music, the tune of piano thrilled me. But it was really nice..

yeah we really played with the mood in this track. there is a sense of sad in the verses, like a drown and then almost a shifting chorus almost statement like sorda shifting the feel a bit, and then the more hopeful poem at the end. The track is more lending to the feeling of even though things around us seem hard, we are creating our own stories over and over, the emotions sorta bleed in the way sometimes. The trick it to express them out in a palette of sound and then release it. We took a risk with this one, would call it more a sound art poetry track. huge thanks for your ear and listening

Yeah the sadness in the verses, I literally cried. I can see you all put great efforts on the song, I do enjoy it. You really did a great job..

I listened to this whole wonderful musical experience and here is my upvote, this comment and a resteem.

huge thanks my friend :)

Thank you for sharing ♥ happy Valentines Day

Awesome music Beautiful sound thanks for sharing keep it up
God bless you

Thanks for sharing i will done upvote I always see your post. And follow you

My first reaction was “sigh”

Everything in life seems to be a never ending cycle . Right when we think we made it to the top, we fall and it continues ffrom there

I think it was needed in the track a little after the voice started some hat and then the accompaniment of a light percussion that would give more life and depth to the song.