The Air You Breathe In (Original)

in dsound •  6 years ago  (edited)


I wrote this song not long after the earthquake and subsequent tsunami that flooded Japan in early 2011.

I was struck by the enormity of the tragedy – feeling too impossibly tiny and unable to offer any kind of meaningful aid. That sent me into contemplation about the general state of affairs on this planet, recalling how often I'd found myself feeling a similar helplessness – watching from afar yet empathetically connected – all too aware of the considerable human losses.

I thought about Hurricane Katrina and the broken levies – about the seemingly endless wars and the cost of living as we do – about how isolated so many of us feel, despite being more technologically 'connected' than ever. As always, I felt a kind of deep sadness that felt too heavy to carry. This song was born of that sentiment.

Unfortunately, I can't remember how to play this one. That happens a lot. At least I made this rough recording right after I wrote it. If it only ever exists in this form, I suppose I'll be alright with that.

Thanks for listening...



The Air You Breathe In

I know it's hard to keep your spirits up,
when everything around you is falling apart
and everywhere you see so much suffering;
so many people barely gettin' by

shouldn't we know by now how to share the wealth?
shouldn't we know by now how to care for our own kind?
why don't we care for our own kind?

and everyone you meet looks so lonely;
caught up in their own, secluded lives
it's difficult to keep the connection that we seek
in a culture designed to further divide

we stare at our TVs and our computer screens,
trying not to feel the emptiness inside,
oh, the emptiness...inside

the business of war is easy to ignore,
as we fill up our tanks and drive
but it's hard to feel safe, when levies break
and Earth shakes over shifting faultlines

the water rushes in, taking everything
and all you have left is yourself
and the air that you breathe in

I don't know if I can carry this world,
but I can try – oh, I can try; I've gotta try
I will take them on my shoulders and into my heart
oh, take them on my shoulders and into my heart
into my heart...into my heart, my heart, my heart


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this says a lot of how i feel about the world. thank you for saying it so eloquently

Thank you, dear. Sometimes I feel like there are no words, yet song helps me give those few that I can find a little bit more impact. <3

this is such a beautiful song Zippers.. and it shows in more ways than one why we became such good friends.

I'm glad you appreciate it, Meno dear – that means a lot to me. And I agree – our hearts are troubled by similar things. Love you, dear. <3

So beautiful, frail, strong, delicate, heartfelt and tad bit aching... thanks for sharing this beauty

Wrapping you in delicate butterfly wings – a fluttery, fairy sort of hug. <3

Hugs back... You are very gifted

Sometimes I just have to process what I've heard in a song before I can make any kind of meaningful comment, this is one of those songs, it's too deep for me to be able to just make a simple comment about it. Except to say this...

You're adorable – you know that, Amber? It's true.

Bravo!! Encore!!! Bis!! standing ovation going on here... :-)

This is so beautiful, @zipporah, thank you. How on earth did you conceive of that illogical sounding but so beautiful rhythm on the guitar strings..? Astounding...

Thank you so much for that blush-inducing, heart-warming shill today. How wonderfully amusing that we shilled each-other's posts, and so clearly find ourselves within each-other's work! I'm sincerely delighted by that fact! <3

Very much needless to say, but: likewise, and I agree 100% ;-) <3

Sounds like a song written from a kindred heart. Lovin' you, over here. ((hugs))

I take that as a high compliment, dear heart – two tremendously TINY ladies with immense hearts. <3

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Glad you enjoyed it! Now, go pick up a guitar. ;)

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Such an amazing song, the vocals are stunning and match the music perfectly. It is haunting and emotional, you can feel that sadness and isolation through it - but yet you bring hope through the lyrics and the last verse says it all.

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There is a deep, sincerely aching sadness in this song. It's how I was honestly feeling – as I so often feel. I'm deeply touched to know that so many others resonate with the sentiment as well. <3

Oh my goodness... I think @yidneth hit the nail on the head with "a tad bit aching" - impossibly beautiful and sad. Your voice is stunning. E x

Deep bows – grateful to know I've touched you so. <3

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This is so very beautiful, Zippy <3 It always drives me slightly nuts when people compare my creative endeavours to other things they're familiar with - are people really incapable of just EXPERIENCING something AS IT IS, for it's own sake? - so I'm going to makle sure to let you know here and now that you are a UNIQUE and BEAUTIFUL expression of life and your voice and songwriting doesn't remind me of ANYTHING or ANYONE else :o)

Thank you for sharing. So much resonance! xxx

Just beautiful...!!!

Thank you! :)

Lovely. Why do we live the way we do as a species? There isn't enough love in our hearts to heal the planet of all the problems we face daily. I really wish there was enough compassion to end all violence. Someday maybe.....And let's hope the next major disaster is kind to those who will be affected by whatever it may be.

Such a beautiful song. I love your voice.

that's crazy beautiful! the background and colours or so nice

Nice

I was in Tokyo when the quake happened. It was pretty scary here and we felt so helpless. My thoughts as I watched the nonstop TV coverage of the horror unfold shortly after we experienced the quake were much as what you expressed in your song. If I can find it, I'll try to upload the short story I wrote several days after the first in the series of quakes.

Of course, the tsunami was so tragic and horrific, but the meltdown at Fukushima was the "gift from hell" that keeps "giving."

very beautiful, I feel every word you sing, thank you for sharing this with us all xx


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Thanks!