RE: Prototype Dreams - Devon's Diary +14

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Prototype Dreams - Devon's Diary +14

in erotica •  7 years ago 

Really good sequel and teaser for the next episode(s). I love the idea that you're drip-feeding a long story ala Dickens. You don't even need to know where it's going to go next, or for how long! Maybe she ends up with two lovers: Adam for the metronomic pounding that she craves and dreams about, and a flesh and blood (I was going to say meat) lover for her day to day emotional needs. A lover's triangle, of a sort. Looking forward to more.

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Your comment made me laugh aloud! Thank you. I appreciate your enthusiasm and insight. Interesting meaty idea too.

Also laughed at metrinomic haha