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A father and a mother all in one.
A mother gives birth to scattered children,
A father looking for the special one.
I am a mother to many children,
stretch marks in my brain to prove it.
A mother gives birth to a still born,
Her solemn tales of grief says it.
An Idea birthed from womb of brain matter,
A brain child nursed by the same father.
These hands have held you before you were born,
These eyes have seen you before I mourn.
A waiting mother, an hopeful father,
A new heart-beat from strive and chance,
Another brain child concieved from circumstance.
Thanks for reading :-)
@abmakko,
An unusual, but interesting, choice of metaphors.
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Thanks for your commentary... I do have a thing for graphic images
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What an interesting way to put it, this is beautiful!
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Thank you @alimamasstory... I'm glad you saw its beauty..
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Beautiful words
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Thank you @alabalistic
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And so we grow in numbers and rows.
Do we get smarter? Is this a show?
Beautiful writing my fellow soul!
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Thanks for reading friend :-) peace
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"Stretch marks in my brain' - PERFECT description!
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Thanks for enjoying my poem... I'm glad you stopped by
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Interesting poem! What were you alluding to with the part about an idea that dies before it’s born? Something you think about but decide is not worth pursuing?
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Yes... grief and loss... but it ends on a more positive note... thanks for your interesting question
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Touching poem and well written.
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Thanks for reading @thegoliath ...
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Such a powerful but simple metaphor @abmakko. Simple may be the wrong word, impactful.... I don't know if that is a word lol, but that is the impression that imagery gives, impact. Love it!
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Thanks for your insight... sometimes I think I might sound too raw, I almost scrapped that line off. thankfully I kept it.. thanks for enjoying it. :-)
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i think i have stretch marks in my brain...lol. man i missed you... i kept checking back but you were steemit resting...
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thanks for checking up on me fam... yeah.. I had to settle some issues outside steemit... but I'm back now and still pushing it... glad you enjoyed the read
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A Metaphorically interesting poem. Makes you think and well written. Good job!
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thanks man.. I appreciate you passing by and enjoying it :-)
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What a fantastic leap of analogy! That is quite a clever thought! Thank you for sharing your philosophy and poetic skills in #steemitbloggers 😊
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Thanks for enjoying my writing @thekittygirl... I'm glad you passed by
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This is beautiful! Brought tears to my eyes....thanks for sharing this.
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Awwwwn... thank you @artemisnorth... glad you felt the words...
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Really wonderful poem, it sounds perfect as well - @enginewitty read it in his Friday show #WordsWithWitty
#thealliance #witness
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wow... A big thanks to the @thealliance @enginewitty. thanks for reading it, I'm glad that people were able to connect to the words...
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