Stop the Delphians (A 1,000 word sci-fi story)

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Gork swam forward into the warm waters at the mouth of the cave and blew twin streams of water out his blow holes to signal Alec. He floated patiently and waited for Alec, who was late as usual.

There was much to be done to ready the underwater city of Mercy for the upcoming battle with the Delphians. AFIT, Mercy’s head A.I., was predicting that the Dephians would strike within six weeks. Any later than that and hurricane season would begin, making an attack virtually impossible.

“Sorry I’m late, Gork.” Alec reached the edge of the water and tapped at his control band with flying fingers. Skin changed to iridescent scales as Alec was transformed into his amphibian manifestation. He waded into the water and nestled between two large soft spikes running the length of Gork’s back.

“No problem, Alec. I wouldn’t know how to act if you were on time,” Gork chuckled in that odd rumbling way. “AFIT instructed me to take you to the outer dome sonic array at Checkpoint B. The sensor keeps picking up an anomaly and he needs you to troubleshoot it.”

“That’s pretty vague. Is that all he told you?”

Gork hesitated before he answered. He didn’t like lying to Alec, but AFIT had given specific orders that no one must be told what was appearing on the sonar readings. AFIT’s data runs could come up with no viable explanation for what was occurring. “Yep, that’s all he said. I guess he’s leaving it to you find out what’s going on.”

AFIT was basically using Alec as bait by sending him outside the dome to work. Gork knew that AFIT and the other AIs had little regard for the few humanoids left alive. They were happy to use them for their manual dexterity and innovative way of looking at problems, but they had no remorse about sending them into danger. They were considered just another tool.

Gork didn’t feel that way though. He and Alec had been working as a maintenance team for the past few months and he’d actually grown attached to the humanoid.

They glided through the water moving ever downward. The light diminished to almost total darkness as they reached the wide split in the ocean floor. At the lip of the crevice, they could see the glow of the dome and surrounding area several miles below them. They stopped as Alec used his control band and programmed in the harder compression suit that would allow him to survive the pressure at the bottom. After the last interlocking piece had deployed and hardened they made their way over the edge and down to the dome.

A square mile was lit up around the dome but beyond that was pitch black. Checkpoint B, where Alec was being sent, was outside the reach of the lighted area. Working in that oppressive blackness always make him more than a little nervous. They entered the tunnel to the dome and came up in the airlock for arrivals and departures. Alec went through the usual checkpoints with the guards and proceeded to the maintenance wing to pick up his tools. Gork waited in the airlock for Alec, with an almost overwhelming feeling of dread.

AFIT sent a message to Gork’s subdural transmitter. “Take him to the checkpoint, then tell him you will retrieve him in one hour. I need him to be out there alone and observe what happens.”

Gork’s feeling of impending disaster increased.

Alec came back to the airlock with his tools in the carryall. He reattached his headgear and slid onto Gork’s back. Together they left the airlock and headed for Checkpoint B. “Alec, I received new orders to investigate a report of widening of the crevice at Alpha 4. I’ll drop you off at B and I’ll be back within the hour.”

“Sure, Gork, that’s fine. I’m probably going to have to dismantle the array, depending on what my preliminary scans show. Take your time.”

Alec deployed the accu-link from his control band and linked it to the array. Intent on watching the display on his band he was oblivious to his surroundings. All the aquatic life had left the vicinity, an obvious hint that danger was in the area.

AFIT was monitoring everything from his control module deep within Mercy’s data center. The sonar array was picking up information on all spectrums.

And there it was, the indication of a huge slow-moving mass heading toward Checkpoint B. It defied identification by any of AFIT’s systems and in the previous few cycles, this same signature had crept right up to the edge of the lighted area and stopped. Was it some new kind of secret weapon developed by the Delphians? AFIT had tried posting droids as bait but the thing had never approached the droids.

Alec stared at his screen with a puzzled expression. All the diagnostics came up clear, there were no anomalies. He sent an electronic coded pulse to Mercy maintenance to request further information. There was no returning pulse to indicate receipt of his message.

A thin tendril snaked along the ocean floor toward Alec. A huge pulsing blob was hovering in the complete blackness outside of the lighted area. Alec felt an uncomfortable tingling in his lower legs. He immediately thought something was going wrong with his compression suit. Therefore, he was totally shocked to look down and see his lower legs completely encased in a tentacle-like appendage slowly working its way upward on his body.

He sent out distress signals and struggled against the constraints to no avail. Another tendril floated over and began wrapping him up from the top down. Soon he was totally encased and paralyzed. Just as he had resigned himself to a terrifying death he felt the creature speaking to him in his mind.

“Humanoid, I will not harm you. This upcoming war will destroy our world. Together we will stop this war before it begins.”

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I loved it.
It builds up the suspense and tension around a neatly elaborated world.
Will this story have a sequel? It deserves one :)
Does it take you too long to come up with tech details particular of this genre? do you have to do some research, or just make up some things?

@hlezama Thanks for your comments and questions. I am thinking of a sequel, there is so much I could do with this underwater city of Mercy, ran by AI being, and set to be attacked by the Delphians! Sometimes I do research when I want to talk about a particular thing that I want to be real. For instance, in my C.J. McCallister series, I researched handguns to come up with a real viable weapon for her to be carrying. But in this one, I just used my general knowledge from reading sci-fi in the past. It wouldn't stand the test of scrutiny from the real sci-fi purist, but I had fun with it.

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Wow congratulations @blueeyes8960 great short story, well deserved @curie and @c-squared approval.

@joanstewart thanks for the compliment and reading my story!

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Great story you have in there. I enjoyed reading your story and it kind of made my day. Each second spent on your blog was worthwhile and am glad i landed on your post this early morning here. It always feels great to start my day with such a great story. Great work and keep the sharing spirit up

@ferrate Thank you very much for that encouraging comment! And that's one of the things I like about flash fiction, you can absorb the whole story in one sitting and get on with other things. I love reading books as well, but sometimes all you want is a nice complete story - like an appetizer, lol.

Yea, we all need this great appetizer and am glad i had it from you....XD.
You are welcome by the way too

Hey Blueyes,

congrats on your well deserved Curie.

I love your writing, your have a fine imagination and also loved the picture you used here. First looking at the picture and then reading helped me a reader to imagine way better.

Thanks for sharing it with us :)

@vibesforlife Thanks for the compliment. I can't really take credit for the picture though. It was a prompt presented by @blockurator for a science fiction prompt challenge on Narrative. He gave us 3 pictures to choose from (all good ones) and I picked this one. After studying the picture - the story came from that. I'm glad you thought I did the picture justice with the story!

Wow you studied the picture and made the story. Nice :)

@vibesforlife Yes, for some reason my imagination kicks in if I have a visual prompt to go with the word prompt. A lot of my stories I pick the picture first then work from there. In this one: https://steemit.com/microfiction/@blueeyes8960/heart-s-desire-a-microfiction-contest-entry-for-jayna the story was written almost entirely from the picture first.

That's talent of a kind. :)

Another great story, @blueeyes8960. If you'd do me a favor, I love that you're cross-posting your stories to the prompts, would you tag @gardengnomepubs for future posts? Thanks and keep writing your awesome spec-fic posts.

@blockurator Hmm, I thought I had put #gardengnomepubs on that - I went to discord to look up that I had the correct spelling - I must have gotten distracted. I changed #fiction to #gardengnomepubs with an edit. Now you can do me a favor and vote and comment on my stories in your niche. This story on Narrative only has 3 votes....

I'm pretty sure I voted for this one. But I've been traveling for the past two weeks so I might have missed some. I couldn't be online every day, so I got on when I could. I'll check it on it some time in the next day or so. :-)

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What could have been a tragic end has turned out to be a save maybe....
What happens next.....
Good one @blueeyes8960....
I take it the rest are on narrative ;p

@kaerpediem I may have to continue this one, there are a lot of ways to go and the underworld city of Mercy to explore!

This story was written for a prompt on Narrative, but I just had to share it with my Steem community. That's all there is to it so far, just this beginning. I'm glad the STEEM community like it, it's only gotten 3 votes on Narrative, lol.

You so should
And turn it into a FreeRead too :D

@kaerpediem Hey that's a good idea, I have only done one FreeRead and @crypt-skip made a whole video animation to go with it. But it doesn't have to be that big of a production, I could just read the story!

Yes, I started out with all sorts of ideas for the FreeReads.... still working out some of them
But slowly, little by little ... I have gone down to Reading with Text scrolling .... hahahaha

Still going back and forth with the ideas on visuals though
So until then, just read.... we need more FreeReads/Author Readings :)

@kaerpediem Does the story need to be a freewrite though? This one was written on a prompt from the Narrative platform. I do have plenty of other ones to choose from!

No not for the FreeRead
Right now to encourage participation, you can use any story you have written 😊

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Lovely writing! Intriguing until the very end.

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it.

Great story! 😍

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@felt.buzz Thank you, I was thinking of using the underwater city of Mercy and the upcoming war with the Delphians for our next @steemfiction book on Sci-fi. But it looks like that might not be happening. 😱🤔

Very creative and engaging your story @ blueeyes8960, almost wet!

It's a pleasure to read a science fiction story that allows you to feel as real an imaginary world, an extremely fictional situation but through the narrative we can be able to feel as probable, very good writing, I congratulate you ... on the part of the humanoids .

@karupanocitizen Thank you! Very kind words, it's nice to know the story came across the way I intended. And yet still leaves much to the reader's imagination.

Those are the best stories, which leave us the opportunity to complete them with our imagination.

Woah what a finish!!! I loved this story you actually built a great atmosphere in your short story! The relationship with the A.I. was really cool, I loved your story, thanks for sharing!


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Thank you for inclusion in the showcase! Truly an honor to be in the company of the @curie publication. I would offer this for inclusion along with my story:
As a frequent freewriter and short story lover, I often write from prompts. In this effort, the prompt was the picture you see accompanying this story. I studied the picture and an underwater world came to be my take from the photo. I'm glad the world engaged my readers, the best outcome an author can hope for. Thank you @curie for constantly searching for and supporting the content creators of Steem!

you have such a way with words and draw the reader into the story

You have such a way
With words and draw the reader
Into the story

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And you have a way with photographs! Thanks for the compliment!

Most welcome I really enjoyed this story

Found your post in link-drop @ Crowdmind. Interesting post and photo selection was spot on. ❤️❤️❤️🌟🌟🌟🎁🎁🎁👍👍👍

@harmonyval I'm glad you enjoyed the story. The photo was the prompt, and I wrote the story to the prompt. I like using visuals for inspiration!

Excellent way to write, very interesting the theme you chose for your story. I have seen some others but all have their particularity. Congratulations!

@iamsaray I'm glad you enjoyed it! It's amazing how one prompt can lead in so many different directions.