Thousand Heart Attacks!

in esteem •  6 years ago  (edited)





Here in the open sky
We exist
Against our consciousness
Turned into an atheist
Unfocused mind
In a war
Killing ourselves
With an invisible sword

A sword of anger and depression
Oblivion state and oblivious actions
Drugs have become a fashion
No compassion
Ruthless Aggresion
And dying in an nonhierarchical succession

Few dollars in our pocket
and we forget,
Dollars can buy sex, but not intimacy
Dollars can purchase friends, but not family
Dollars can afford birthday cakes, but not life.

Yesterday is over
Tomorrow has no existence
Today is now
Be a worthy soul


The value of man should be seen in what he gives and not in what he is able to recieve. Albert Einstein


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Dude the 'dollar' lines just hit me in the head like a brick. It made me remember that money is good but it isn't everything . For past couple of months money is all that has been on my mind. Thanks for the poem man

  ·  6 years ago (edited)

I am glad my words could touch those barren strings.

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So true. This poem hit like a bomb.

I am trying to make a nuclear bomb and it wont kill anybody:-).. Thank you so much for the support.

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Be a worthy soul

5 syllables sums it up, doesn't it?

Good write.

Quill

I enjoyed the poem very much