ကုိယ္​့ရဲ႕ စာမ်က္​နာမွာ ​ေလာကဓံ​ေတြ႐ွိတယ္....

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သက္​ဆိုင္​သူတုိ႔
အလင္​းတစ္​ခု ဝင္​လာ​ေစဖုိ႔......
ငါ့ စိတ္​ကူး​ေတြ...
အတိအလင္​းခ်မျပခ်င္​ဘူး....။

တမူထူးျခားၿပီးအ႐ူးျဖစ္​ရတဲ့ဘဝအတြက္​
ငါ​ေက်နပ္​​ေနမိ​ေသးလို႔ပါ.....

ုိတခ်ဳိ့လူ​ေတြရဲ႕ ခပ္​ညံညံတံဆိပ္​ကပ္​မႈ​ေတြ​ေအာက္​မွာ...
ငါ့.. ဟန္​ခ်က္​​ေတြ​ ယုိင္​နဲ႔
တိတ္​တဆိတ္​​ေပ်ာက္​ဆုံးသြားခဲ့ရဖူးတယ္​.......

တခ်ိန္​က အတိတ္​တခုကုိ ​ခိုးၾကည္​့တဲ့ခဏ
ျဖစ္​ရပ္​​ေတြတုိင္​းမွာ....
ငါတစ္​​ေယာက္​အလဲအကြဲးပါပဲ....။
႐ႈပ္​​ေထြး ​ေျခာက္​ကပ္​​ေနတဲ့ အခန္​းအျပင္​ဘက္​က
ပတ္​ဝန္​က်င္​ရဲ႕ ဟားတုိက္​သံ​ေတြထဲ
ငါ တည္​ၿငိမ္​စြာ အ​ေနခက္​​ေနခဲ့ဦးမွာပဲ....။

​မထင္​မွတ္​တာ​ေတြပဲ အက်ဴိး​ေပး​ေကာင္​းတဲ့...
ငါလုိ ဒိတၱိ​ေကာင္​ တစ္​​ေယာက္​ရဲ႕
ကုိယ္​တုိင္​​ေရးရာဇဝင္​ထဲမွာ
တစ္​ခါတ​ေလ...
​ေကာင္​းကင္​ဆန္​ျပတတ္​
တခါတ​ေလ​ေတာ့ ငရဲဆန္​ျပတတ္​တဲ့
ဝဋ္​​ေႂကြးတစ္​ခု ငါ့မွာ႐ွိတယ္​....။

အ​ေကာင္​းအဆုိး ဆိုတဲ့....
​အစြန္​းနစ္​ဖက္​ၾကား
ငါဟာ မက္​မက္​ရပ္​ရင္​း
​ေလာကဓံရဲ႕ အလယ္​ဗဟုိတည့္တည္​့ဆိုတာ
ငါ့ကုိမ်ား
တည္​မွတ္​လုပ္​ထားသလားလို႔
ငါ ​ခမ္​းခမ္​းနားနား​ေတြးမိ​ေသးတယ္​...။

ဆုံး႐ႈံးျခင္​း
ပိုင္​ဆုိင္​ျခင္​းတုိ႔ရဲ႕ဇာတ္​ခုံမွာ
ငါ ဟာ... ဂ်ဴိကာတစ္​​ေကာင္​လို
သိမ္​သိမ္​​ေမႊ႔​ေမႊ႔ ​ေလွာင္​​ေျပာင္​​ေနတတ္​ၿပီ....။

လူ႔အသိုင္​းအဝုိင္​းထဲမွာ
ဘက္​တူရင္​ လူမ​ေရြးဘူးတဲ့
တကယ္​​ေတာ့ ဘတ္​တူတယ္​ဆိုတာဘယ္​တုန္​းကမွမ႐ွိခဲ့သလို...။
ခ်ိန္​ခြင္​တစ္​ခုကုိ​ေကာ....
တရားမွ်တတယ္​လို႔ ငါ ဘယ္​တုန္​းကမွမထင္​ခဲ့ဖူးဘူး။

ဘတ္​လဲဘယ္​​ေတာ့မွ မတူဘူး
ဘယ္​လက္​​နဲ႔ ညာလက္​​လဲ
ုံအသုံးဝင္​ပုံျခင္​းမတူဘူး။
မတူညီတာ​ေတြ ကုိယွဥ္​တြဲးဖုိ႔ၾကဳိးစားမိတုိင္​း....
ငါ္​ဟာ မုိက္​႐ူးရဲဆန္​တတ္​မွန္​း
တအံတျသလက္​ခံမိရျပန္​တယ္​....။

လက္​တစ္​​ေခ်ာင္​းကုိ....
ခုတ္​လိုက္​လို႔....
တစ္​​ေခ်ာင္​းအသစ္​ထြက္​မလာတတ္​​ေပမဲ့
ေခါင္​း႐ွိ​ေသးတဲ့ ကုိယ္​ခႏၶာအတြက္​...
ငါဟာ....​..
​ေသခ်ာ​ေပါက္​လူျဖစ္​​ေနတုန္​းပါပဲ....။
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ခက္​လန္​႔လန္​႔အိမ္​မက္​က
နိးထတဲ့အခါ....
ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​နံ႐ုိး​ေလးကျပဳံးၾကည္​့​ေနတယ္​...။

`ကုိကုိ ​နိးပီလား´တဲ့...
ဒါဟာ ကြၽန္​​ေတာ္​ရဲ႕​ေကာင္​း​ေသား
အနာဂတ္​တစ္​ခုသာ ျဖစ္​တယ္​....။

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      https://www.facebook.com/permalink.php?story_fbid=587623411631059&id=100011502162986

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        Hello sir,
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          Do you know what I mean ?

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            I'm sorry I'm in a hurry.
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              You are welcome !

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                    I like your project. I´m coming.
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                      သတ္​ပံု​ေလး​ေတြ ဂ႐ုစိုက္​ပါအံုးဟ

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                        စာျပန္​စစ္​ရမွာပ်င္​း လို႔ ပါ ဟာ

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                          Nice

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                            Thanks

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                              Good👍👍

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                                ✌✌✌

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