You are 100% correct. I could not comprehend your message because of how it was written; and it’s not just about grammar and spelling. You challenged me to point out the parts that I have an issue with, but I think if you read what you wrote out loud, you will catch most of it yourself. My suggestion is to have someone read your articles before you publish them to find anything that doesn’t make sense or can be worded differently to be more concise. I was too direct in my criticism because I was genuinely interested in this subject and was disappointed that I couldn’t figure out what you were saying. Sorry I offended you.