This is a good start, great job on grammar! So many stories are hard to read because of bad grammar, but this one was spotless.
I would love to read about the characters of the book without going too further on the details about the empire.
RE: The Fantasy Book I've been writing for 7 years now. (Part 1)
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thanks for the feedback ;)
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