Give us a hint about timing for next parts, please.
There are a few minor mistakes, but they do not detract from the story, but over 6 years you should have corrected them. I hope you have done so for the rest of the story.
RE: Short Story: Smugglers in Second Class
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Sorry, six years? I wrote this less than a month ago.
Thanks for the feedback; I'll go over it again and see if I can spot any of these issues. Like a lot of my short fiction, this got only one complete editing pass before I posted it, so things sometimes do slip through.
As for the sequel stories, they will be posted to Steemit in the next two days, and once they're up I'll cross-link the posts appropriately.
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Sorry, I read (quickly) through the following
and automatically assumed the 12 was the year.
My mistake
Maybe what I called mistakes in the text should just be called 'awkward' for reading. For instance:
the word Faye is not needed or else the word 'her' should be removed?
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Oh, you're definitely correct in that instance. I'll fix that one, good catch.
I did a general pass through this story after your first comment as well; I fixed a few other things at that time.
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