*MY CHOCOLATE CANDY BAR*

in fiction •  7 years ago 

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Just like every girl her age ,Susan had so many Barbie dolls ,there was Sandra,Amanda and star,Susan loved playing with all of them ,at 5 years old with no sibling yet,they were all she had besides her parents,she did not keep friends.

On her 8th birthday,her mother bought her this beautiful doll ,it was a doll but it wasn't like the others ,there was something different about this doll ,it looked so real and it was bigger than the others and finally it could talk (it always said "chocolate candy bar" ,this made the whole package complete and also Susan now had a junior brother,she was a wonderful kid enjoying childhood.

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Little Susan always carried her doll everywhere even to school,to service ,everywhere indeed ,she became very attached to the doll,her parents noticed her sudden quietness,she always stayed in her room playing with drizella(that was the name of the doll), she rarely ate,and sometimes they could hear her talk to herself even at night,they did not take it too serious for they felt it was a normal thing for girls Susan's age to be inlove with their dolls but it became too much when she stopped talking or playing with her little brother,always on the doll,starring at it like there's was something she was trying to communicate with but still they paid little attention.

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On a beautiful Sunday evening,Susan went upstairs to get her playthings for her doll ,she was coming down the stairs when she spotted her little brother playing with her "drizella" ,she got so furious that she ran straight at her brother and knocked him down so hard that he slumbed but Susan didn't care,she snatched her doll and left her brother ,it was like she was possessed by drizella ,she really did not care.

Her mum found the little boy and he was rushed to the hospital and even with that ,Susan ignored him ,she didn't play with him or pet him ,she had drizella ,she loved her sweet drizella and drizella only.

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When Susan became 12 years old ,her attitude towards family became so unbearable ,she hated everyone else except drizella ,nothing mattered to her,not school ,not family nothing just sweet sweet drizella ,so her parents decided to take the doll away for it was ruining their daughter's life .

One night ,while Susan was asleep ,her parents came into her room and took drizella away ,though they were doing it to help for it had to be done but this was the real beginning of terror in their lives,the beginning of hell as drizella never left,she would never leave her beloved Susan.

TO BE CONTINUED

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So much suspense.
Cant wait to know what happened next

Coming right up

Really interesting....reminds me of chucky #hehehe...

I grew up hating dolls cus of that movie,jeez

Please finish up soon ✌

that might take a while but the continuation just dropped

Yeah.... Followed dear.... No tooo much suspense plzzzz 😰

Interesting.. Following

Yea ,boss boss

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Nice one,,
reminds me of ANNABEL

lol

The name of the doll already sounds like something that's haunted..... I know only gets worse for the family, can't wait for the next one... Nice story

thank you,the continuation just dropped