RE: Glade's Edge: Part III - Swords of St Valentine

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Glade's Edge: Part III - Swords of St Valentine

in fiction •  7 years ago 

I had intended to make the time frame of her last performance more apparent. Should this get reworked I'll add that her last performance is happening the following day. The story still works as is, but you reminded me of something I missed.

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Oh I don't think that's necessarily something you missed, you can always contextulize it later with the performance itself.