RE: Out of Danger

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Out of Danger

in fiction •  6 years ago 

I'm not sure I'd agree that there's no trigger. The first sentence seems like a trigger to me! All the rest of the story is how it is now that you know she's out of danger, and the part before the trigger is implied and guessed at but by no means less powerful for that.

It's a great opening line, by the way.

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Thank you, Fairy.

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