Image source: Midnight Sun by @intrepidphotos
There we were, our bodies lying in tents dotting the mountain side. The sky was a stubborn midnight with bright orange red clouds fading into dark sinister clouds. We were together, we were alive.
You stayed in the other tent, perhaps with your eyes opened like mine. I was thinking about the many things we could do on the mountain side. We would start with running. Our legs would chase each other until we had gone far out of view from the tents.
From then on, my legs begin to squirmer as my thoughs begin to drip. I imagine you looking at me with those devil's eyes. There was always sin brewing when you looked at me. There was a time I would tell myself to look away. Those days are gone.
You would maintain your gaze on me while our legs hurried to close the space between us. It usually started with a kiss. A single innocent kiss that would breed another and another until our tongue begin to caress each other like waves tossed on a boisterous sea.
I wonder whose hands used to stray first. I think it's mine. You have the body of a god and my hands are such willing worshippers. They would rise and fall in adulation as they massaged the landscape of your torso.
I know who goes from the zippers first though. It's you. Always you. You would push my trousers down. Or my skirt. Or whatever stood in your way. Nothing ever stood in your way for so long. I remember when one of my shorts malfunctioned. I remember how you forced it open.
Open. That's the state of my legs as I think such sinful thoughts. I know they are wrong. We are family friends and should remain that way. But we both know we can't. Not since we caught our partners sleeping with each other that afternoon.
So here we are. Our bodies encamped in tents with our partners. They don't know we know about them, how they cheat on us. It's alright though. I've come to fall in love with you and you with me.
This retreat... We know what's going to happen soon under the midnight sun. After all, there's nothing new under the sun.
Hello iamthegray, I really liked the story and how your thoughts fly to tell us every detail. I liked the meaning you gave it. You have a great talent to keep us hooked on the story you're telling us. Great imagination and good writing. I was fascinated to read every detail and word written in your story from beginning to end. Thank you for sharing this excellent post. Have a great day.
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The interesting thing about how you write is that you manage to stay focused. easy reading and understanding.
I think I took the turn at the end by surprise, I thought they were lovers. but the meaning ends up being a cheating story lol.
good focus I loved it
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Great post, man. I did not see that end coming. Beyond that I love how you take someone's photo and then add a story to it. It's such a cool concept. In the way a painting or a sculpture speaks different things to different people, it's very cool to see what can be created fictionally just by looking at an image.
Thank's so much for sharing! I enjoyed reading it. I liked that twist in the end. At least it was a twist for me.
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Greetings @iamthegray, the focus of your story is interesting. Enjoying good company and feelings full of passions is fantastic. Enjoy every detail you showed us in your reading. You caught me completely in my attention in your story from beginning to end. I really liked it. Have a great day.
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It started like a love story and then I realized it was a story of cheating people. Now, I don't know who cheated first but it looks like they don't mind and feel like they CAN continue what they are doing :)
Your writing is beautiful. You are carefully selecting your words to make a perfect story. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on the curie vote!
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Hi iamthegray,
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At first, i was thinking this was a descriptive love story but you gave it a nice twist at the end. I do agree with them, nothing is new under the sun. I would say their patners deserve whatever is coming to them.
I love your story, you describe very well and your words flow easily making reading an enjoyable experience for your reader. Kudos to you and congrats on your curie upvote too!
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That ending came as a surprise to me. It started out as a sweet romantic story and then, an unexpected turn! You write so beautifully that it captures one's attention within seconds...
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I expected an heartbreak at the end but this ending makes your story unique. You have a way with words. All flow together in perfect harmony.
Congrats on another curie upvote!
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What a romantic story?
Pretty sweet!
By the way why your screen name is 'i am the gray'?
Sorry for that question.
And where are you from?
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My name is Gracious. Gray is an abbreviation. TheGray means I'm the real Gray.
It's also a philosophy. I like to dangle in the gray. I believe most times, we experience life in the gray lines and not the white and black existence people make it to be
I'm from Nigeria
Blessings
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Oh I see!
Thank you so very much!
I remember people wearing a gray habit, those missionaries especially, the friars.
Did you see those people in your country?
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nah. I don't remember seeing any
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Oh, no problem.
So, your favorite color is gray obviously but maybe not.
Anyways, colors play an important role on arts and I guess in life as well as a representation of something.
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I don't have a favorite color. But if I had, it would be gray. So you're probably right
Thanks for coming
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Oh you're very much welcome!
Thanks for spending your precious time replying to my comments.
By the way, congrats on @curie upvote!
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Liked your story a lot, specially the way you handle the descriptions. Easy to understand and taking the reader slowly to an unexpected end. Congratulations!
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