RE: "The Invisible Man, starring Johnny Depp" (part 1) - my first comedy mash-up book. Would love feedback.

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"The Invisible Man, starring Johnny Depp" (part 1) - my first comedy mash-up book. Would love feedback.

in fiction •  7 years ago 

I like your vivid writing style. Why the food references? Are you a would be chef? Anyway it's a great fun idea and perhaps Mr Depp would have liked it too. Try writing a real screenplay, I think you'd be good. A tip: Horror stories pay well although I've never tried one. Good luck you have talent. JV

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thanks! The food items are things I found on a Ritz-Carlton menu online. Figured he'd be eating finer foods because he's a big celebrity.

Good it means you research! Keep on writing...