If this was supposed to introduce Francis then this felt forced
I do not understand what kind of world this
If the story is going for a realistic one then a knight or any skilled fighter would not take unnecessary risks
If it is going for a fantasy then i do not see nothing to suggest it
Francis is a greedy chivalrous knight not interesting as a character
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I told the writer all that weeks ago. He still thinks it's an amazing story with a great lead. It's not.
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kehsihba thatanimesnob alt confirmed. I mean he spews the same unjustified criticism, joined this month, and has only one comment. Sure does seem fishy...
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If snob had an alternative account why would he only comment here
I commented because it was asked by the one who posted the article
If it was snobs post he would would have attacked both the story and its author
It is very difficult to type with my phone
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I can clame the same as you also joined this month and only have comments on this post
Can you give your reasons for not being thatanimesnob alt
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Talking about contradictions or unjustified claims.
Why?
This is not a sentence.
Fucking duh. It's not realistic.
Double negative. Also you just mentioned the risk bit, not to mention the improbable physics.
How is he chivalrous if he's greedy? These are mutually exclusive characteristics.
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