RE: BLACK of MOON - Three

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BLACK of MOON - Three

in fiction •  8 years ago 

Enjoying this one too!

Do you mind a couple of editing tips? 2nd para "leather armer" should be "leather armour". And it wasn't Pog who told her to look the Crone in the eye, it was Elk Helm.

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Thank for pointing those out! Will update with the fixes :)