RE: Magic From The Sky - Part 1

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Magic From The Sky - Part 1

in fiction •  7 years ago 

That floating volleyball is tailor made to generate feels in part 3, if I know my Dent Formula.

Solid start. Great character introductions, and a spare but useful bit of worldbuilding around Jarik. Digging it.

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