RE: Jophi's Journey: Part 6 : A Steemit Fiction Series

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Jophi's Journey: Part 6 : A Steemit Fiction Series

in fiction •  7 years ago 

Her muscles ached and her Jophi approached her door
There is one "her" too much in the sentence, good read otherwise.

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Thanks! That's what I get trying to finish in a hurry, I miss stupid stuff, haha. It's fixed!