Oh, how exciting... The dark timbre of this ritual was quite unexpected and jarring, but the way you filled with life seems to make a harmony out of the discord. I particularly like your starting the chapter in medias res, preferring not describe how Rhainyr, the sisters and the bard got to the sanctum really elevates the otherworldly quality of the ritual. Can't wait for the climax!
RE: Glade's Edge: Part IV - Swords of St Valentine
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Glade's Edge: Part IV - Swords of St Valentine
Much thanks! This is sort of a protoype for a novel I hope to release in the fall. The novel will fill in all the little bits. Here it's raw and to the point using an old pulp short story formula Bryce Beattie, from Storyhack, dredged up from a Writer's Digest from the 40's.
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