RE: Wild at heart, the artifact

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Wild at heart, the artifact

in fiction •  7 years ago 

The story is good but you could benefit from improvement in punctuation. Consider using more periods and fewer commas. If you must, include a semicolon.

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      ·  7 years ago 

    noted , thanks

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