Well, let's do it. I tend to write my stuff and mull it over, pick out those dung beetles for a few days, before letting a fresh set of eyes take a gander. That said, please shoot me an email. I'm not sure what word processing program you use, but if you sent me a Google Docs link (there's a setting where people can only comment but can't actually change the text) I could shoot you some pointers. And visa versa, aloha!