Day 68: 5 Minute Freewrite - Prompt: pillow

in fiction •  7 years ago 

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The yellow pillow.

The story begins with it and the life of my loved ones ended due to it.

It was just like any other sunday. We had been to the flea market just for the fun of it.

I walked by many stalls and almost did walk by the stall where the pillow was. I should have.

On the furthest shelf was a bright yellow colored pillow. I have no Idea why, but I was drawn to it. For 20 Rs, it was certainly a bargain. I checked carefully but there were no visible flaws with it and looked very clean.

The trouble started on the second night that it was home.

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

WHAT trouble?????????????????????????????????

OMG I NEED to know!

Haha. I am glad you liked it.

Dangerous pillow!

I liked this. Started so normal and then the hint of something more.

I am glad you liked it. Thank you!

I think I'd like to know more

I might do a part 2 separately a little later. Maybe today!

Tell me what happened, or I kill you lol. 😮

This is why I can never be satisfied with just a 5 min. freewrite lol, I just can't be that cruel to my readers. 😉

Nice hook though, and by the way, I haven't been to a flea market in years and now I want to go. Thanks a lot for that too lol! 🙄

Haha thanks. I take the freewrite as an excuse to leave my readers hanging. Haha!

Hello, stopping by from freewrite. I couldn't find your freewrite for day 71 so I'm reading this one. Nice post.

Thank you Dee!