Raisa

in fiction •  7 years ago  (edited)

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About a year ago, Raisa began to feel in love. Initially, Raisa did not understand what love is. When Raisa began to understand what it was, at that moment Raisa started to like one of her high school friends. He was with Fathya. Fathya and Raisa had a one-month approach. Finally, Fathya expressed his love for Raisa.
"Raisa, do you want to be my lover? Lo remember it, we used to be small as I also like you. "
Those words are SMS from Fathya to Raisa. Raisa did not immediately accept Fathya. Raisa gives a variety of conditions. Apparently, Fathya agreed to that requirement.

About two or three hours later, Raisa asked her mother.
"Ma, I can go out with Fathya not?" I asked Mama.
"Dating? Not yet, "replied Mama Raisa.
Raisa is confused. Finally, Raisa chose to backstreet.

During Raisa's dating with Fathya about 2 or 3 months later, Raisa feels weird with Fathya's behavior that has not cared for her. During that time, Raisa was still able to restrain her emotions and anger. At that time, Raisa has not dared to ask Fathya why he changed. After 6 months, Raisa also broke up with Fathya because of something that according to Raisa Fathya has turned away.



A few days later, Raisa opens twitter Fathya. Raisa was shocked and she held back the tears so deep because Fathya was dating a woman named Angel. Raisa still feel jealous and can not move on from Fathya. Then, Raisa thought for a moment.
"If I accept Fathya, I'll have an ending gini deh," Raisa said in her deepest heart as she wept a little cry.

Fortunately, Raisa has a good friend and always there at the time Raisa like and sorrow. His best friend was Keenan. Keenan has always accompanied Raisa since Raisa broke up with Fathya. According to Raisa, Keenan is a good man, faithful and more mature because Keenan 3 years older than Raisa.

Once, Keenan approached Raisa who was engrossed in playing Online Game at Raisa's house.
"Sa, go yuk," Keenan cajoled.
"Where are you going Nan? Do you have money? "Raisa said.
"Go to the cafe. Have a Sa. I pay you. "
"Well, yes. We ride bikes aja yuk Nan? "
"Come on. Capcuz. "

In the middle of the journey, Raisa continued to pedal the bike with all her strength. Incidentally, the streets are lonely. Raisa and Keenan agreed to race the bike.
"Eh Nan, bike race yuk. Dare kaga lo? "Asked Raisa.
"Raisa unyu, I must be defeated."
"Do not pessimistic dong, we so people should always be optimistic and believe," said Raisa counsel Keenan.
"Widih, tumben Sa lo wise. Yeah-yeah. We start well, 1, 2,3, go! "
"Ngeeengg ..." Raisa bicycle sound that around the tire was given plastic glass of mineral water used.

The two of them, race bike race for approximately 30 minutes duration. They both went to a cafe they used to visit to play online games.
Arriving Raisa and Keenan in front of the cafe, unexpectedly Fathya was heading to the cafe by holding his current girlfriend named Angel.
Instantly, Raisa's eyes flushed and tear slightly.
"Sa, lo why sad?" Asked Keenan curious.
"Cave kaga why-why."
"Which one is Sa?"
"If I can be honest, I'm sad because I see Fathya with Angel."
"Oh, it's Sa. Lo do not cry. "
"Let's go home now. Come on. "
"Yes."

On the way, Keenan always talked to Raisa. But still Raisa is not
answer Keenan's question a word.

Arriving at home, Raisa surprised by the yellow flag on the fence of his house. He went straight into the house. There, there is his mother who burst into tears. He asked Tantenya what exactly was going on.
"Lah, Auntie. Kok on crying hell? "Asked Raisa to one of his nearest neighbors.
"Raisa, your father died," said Aunt Ipeh crying.
Raisa immediately shed tears and cry. Immediately, Keenan comes over to Raisa and as soon as possible to do something to calm Raisa's cry.
"Sa, lo is stoic yes. Lo must irked the departure of Papa lo, "said Keenan who tried to calm Raisa.
Actually before Papa Raisa died, it was his heart attack suddenly. Mama Raisa did not directly think that Mama Raisa should immediately call an ambulance. Mama Raisa does not know what to do. Mama Raisa just applied rubbing / balm to hand, stomach and paw legs. Due to late getting help, instantly Papa Raisa's entire body turned blue, lying stiffly helpless at all and was unable to issue a word.

The next day exactly at around 9:30 pm, Papa Raisa buried in the village cemetery around the house Raisa. Raisa sobbed and shed tears in her eyes. Keenan tried to console Raisa. After Raisa did not cry, Keenan seemed to be feeling awkward and Raisa was surprised at it. Unexpectedly, it turns out Keenan likes Raisa.
"I'm saying what if I go to Raisa if I like him," Keenan thought in his heart.
However, Keenan can not express that feeling. Maybe, Keenan could say that his feelings were just "secretive".

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