RE: And It Happened (Part 1)

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And It Happened (Part 1)

in fiction •  7 years ago  (edited)

Kids stuff. You might want to check for a few errors. Other than that, you tried, but this didnt have any kinda theme behind it. Story was short-lived

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Thank you so much for the corrections. I'll improve in the next episode which will bring out the theme behind the story. Thanks for coming around.

Thank you so much for
The corrections. I'll prove in
The next episode.

                 - yvo


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