RE: The Machine (Simulations, Pilot Chapter)

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The Machine (Simulations, Pilot Chapter)

in fiction •  6 years ago 

I like your writing style. I particularly enjoyed the bit about the excessive focus on the apple. Really gave the character some depth.

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      ·  6 years ago 

    Thank you 💚
    Following some advice, I'm trying to do "deeper" storytelling than I'm used to, with more focus on the protagonist's experiences.

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