The PROTON that fell in love with an ELECTRON | Part 1

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Once there was a guy named Proton. He was always happy and had a very positive behavior all the time. Everyone in the nucleus knew him as a good guy.

Everything was going well in his life. He was content with his life.

It was just a normal day. He decided to go to the nearest supermarket in s-orbital to buy some groceries. Just when he was going to pick up his favourite cereals- the "Quarky O's", his eyes fell on a beautiful lady.

She was very pretty and Proton knew that she was the one. He had not seen anyone like her.

He had this incredible urge to go near her. It was as if there was some attractive force between the two.

He then finally decided to go and talk to her. The more he went near her, the more the force was.

From the corner of his eye he could notice that she too was feeling the effect of that mysterious force.

They were finally face-to-face but neither of them said a word. They just looked into each other's eyes.

Finally, Proton mustered up the courage to talk to her and said,"Hi, I'm Proton."

She blushed and said,"Hello. Nice too meet you Proton. My name is Negativa. Negativa Electron."

They then talked and Proton found out that she had come from the d-orbital.

At this he asked,"What you doing here in s-orbital?" because it was quite far away from her hometown in d-orbital.

She replied that she had just released some of her energy so she came here.

They then talked and talked. Later they went to have some coffee. A few days later they were meeting regularly.

They were in love.

After a few months Proton decided to propose to her. They went to watch a movie 'The guardians of the orbitals' which was recently released. Later that night, they went to have dinner in a restaurant where he finally proposed to her.

But as it turned out, she had gained quite a lot of energy in the past few days and as a result she had to return to d-orbital. Infact, it was her last day in s-orbital.

To be continued...



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Wow, I have no words. Magnetism, AC/DC theory, quantum physics; the way you turned that into a love story is quite unique. I'm not a love story guy myself, but I am a low voltage electrician and couldn't stop reading. Yay science (with drama)!

I am so glad that you liked it.

Stay tuned for the other parts of this story.

Will do.

Once a duckling feel in love with a walrus :)
Cool story !

Haha thanks :p

Well, good for the proton.

Haha..yes!

Will be waiting for the second part.

Great! I'll post it as soon as I can.

great story brother.

Thank you

Aww if only they used something like this as intro for chemistry! <3 Love it. It made me smile

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

Using science in a story, now that's an awesome approach! I would love to see more content like this. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing!

Thank you.

I'm a science student and this just came up while I was reading electrostatics

😂😂😂🤓

😃

and it all ended up in annihilation..

Maybe..maybe not! ;)

Nice correlation
Beautiful post

Thanks

awesome, looking forward to next part!

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Wow. Thank you!

Haha thats funny, excited about next episode, will she accept the proposal or not......
Protons parents wont allow electron to enter in his home i guess, well he should leave the home for her if she accepts.😂😂

Haha..we will see what happens in the next part.

I m waiting

Wow! Heartbreaker.... Love between protons and electrons is a risky business. Look forward to Part 2!

great! I'll read it today!

This is so cute. Can't wait for part 2. Amazing concept :D

Thanks :p

I don't hate it, but I'm not a science guy so I was trying to understand but then there's part 2, I gotta finish this before I judge.

Yeah some terms maybe tricky for the layman.

Well done dude!

Thank you :)

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This story is Electrifying looking forward for the next Part.

Love your creative thinking absolutely amazing

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