Reality in Retrospect

I know right @tonygreene113. I'm ok fixing a computer but put me in front of a broken car and I just want t to hit it with a spanner. 😉 thanks for your visit and the support

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appreciator (66) · 7 years ago

This post is sponsored by @appreciator in collaboration with #steemitbloggers. Keep up the good work

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raj808 (71) · 7 years ago

Thanks for inclusion in your curation again @appreciator. I am honored and thankful of the support and vote :)

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jayna (69) · 7 years ago

I like how your final, edited story turned out! Nice work, @raj808. See you at The Block.

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raj808 (71) · 7 years ago

Thanks @jayna, I was reasonably pleased given the time constraints. If I had more time I would have liked to have delved a little deeper into the future reality where the story concluded. I just hope the extra paragraphs I added filled in some of the gaps in explaining the characters need to re-live other peoples crisis situations. Anyway, thanks for your help in the workshop, I have another Sci-Fi story in process at the moment which I shall be dropping in the fiction workshop soon ✍ 🙂

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shawnamawna (65) · 7 years ago

This story is amazing. I was surprised when it moved into sci-fi. Very pleasantly surprised. 100% upvoted, resteemed and followed.

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raj808 (71) · 7 years ago

Many thanks @shawnamawna for the comment/upvote/resteem and the lovely compliment. It is my first fiction competition entry on steemit so wish me luck 😉 Seriously though, I am just glad that everyone seems to have enjoyed it and it is getting read. Take care

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raj808 (71) · 7 years ago

P.s. I have followed you back too @shawnamawna :)

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jayiddon (28) · 7 years ago

Oh gooood! Spooky and twisting fantasy trip. Thank you bud’.

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raj808 (71) · 7 years ago

Thanks m8ty. Glad you enjoyed it! Show it to the boy's or Xio or anyone you think will enjoy it 🙂

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jrhughes (57) · 7 years ago

This was a really cool take on the prompt, I like it! Best of luck to you in the contest!

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raj808 (71) · 7 years ago

Thanks @jrhughes, I just took a read of yours and really liked it. Good luck to you too :)

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qurator (76) · 7 years ago

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kdee916 (58) · 7 years ago

Well, the twist was surely something. Smooth transition. Great work!

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raj808 (71) · 7 years ago

Thanks a lot for your feedback @kdee916. I am glad the transition from the construct reality flowed well as I really wanted it to come across that way. A smooth transition indeed, thanks for the comment and your support 🙂

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raj808 (71) · 7 years ago

@OriginalWorks

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sharoonyasir (58) · 7 years ago

Till the last sentence, I kept guessing different things. This was very very interesting!

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raj808 (71) · 7 years ago

So glad you enjoyed it @sharoonyasir. I have wrote a lot of short story fiction in the past but had a long break from prose. This was my first attempt at Sci-Fi and I will definitely be writing more. The fact it kept you guessing is the biggest compliment you could pay me. Thanks, I will keep them coming ✍ 🙂

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sharoonyasir (58) · 7 years ago

Yayy that's wonderful :)

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kriptonoob (58) · 7 years ago (edited)

Training every day... ;)

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raj808 (71) · 7 years ago

Yes @kriptonoob. I'm weight lifting 300 pounds of metaphorical Iron, pumping the allegorical barbells in my mission to get some serious poetry guns and a ripped fiction 6-pack 😉 Cheers for your comment and support, much appreciated

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mickolas13 (46) · 7 years ago

Wow. This was deep. Like a journey back to the singularity of essence. Nice piece, I should really read some more of your work 📖

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raj808 (71) · 7 years ago

Thanks @mickolas13. I have another Sci-Fi story planned to be published in the next week at some point. It's longer and a little different but hopefully still with the deep vibes 😉 I shall be sure to check out your profile and writing also ✍ 🙂

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