This is really good, Andrei - a nice narrative hook that sets the rest of series up nicely.
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The Stellar Wild - Chapter 2
This is really good, Andrei - a nice narrative hook that sets the rest of series up nicely.
Thank you! I'm not the greatest writer in the world when it comes to dialogue, but I think it turned out pretty well overall. I translated most of this conversation from a screenplay format, which had almost no exposition in it, so filling in the blanks was an interesting exercise.
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