Swan Song - Flash Fiction

in fiction •  7 years ago 

There was an ambiance of a funeral. Three men and two women gathered around the record player. They were the only ones left who cared.

"Is everyone ready?" one of the men asked. He held the needle in his hand.

Everyone nodded slowly.

The man lowered the needle onto the record player.

There was a crackle. A woman smiled. That sound. Then the record started to play. It was an old song. From the 70s'. But it wasn't the track that was important.

All eyes were on the record as it spun and spun. They took in each note. Embraced it.

The song didn't finish. There was a skip. A cry was heard from the crowd. Then the record went dead.

The man tried to play it again. But the vinyl was too old.

"That's it," he said, as he picked up the record and put in the garbage.

There was a collective sigh. Then each one put on their headphones and went on with their day.
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Very short, and yet very emotional... These words have endless boundaries as we all are able to picture our different perspectives in a figuratively way as it relates to it. I'll love to read through it one more time.

Beautiful story that makes me almost cry.

A short but very deep story. Thanks for sharing. Greetings from Venezuela

Well done, beautiful story
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Great post

Its a true article. Good post.

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Thank you for the story!

creating a good ambiance in funeral really worth appreciating as hi or her soul will enjoy the journey

Funny story, unexpected ending and nice storytelling style @whatageek. That sound when vinyl starts playing is really something very unusual and pleasant.

LOL Love it!

It would have been nice to have three women on the four sides of the player.

love it man..looking forward to your post..upvoted:hope you will visit my blog too.

Heartache story

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its all in your head the weirdness the crazy the dreamer. don't let it out. they are gonna steal it from you

Wonderful music and great story bro.
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This is so great! beautiful story

Best story, solid performance. I like it..

This is a unique rendition of the good old days! A Great read

Ohhhhhh.
Me pregunto ¿Qué haré con mis Vinilos? ¿Que haré con el plato Marantz? ¿Que haré con el viejo disco de Blood, sweat and tears?
Saludos

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  ·  7 years ago (edited)

Somewhere in a landfill
"Hey man welcome to the neighbourhood. We're having a little party at the back of those rusty old trucks. Why don't you join us - It's 80's night."

A scratched up old vynil looks on as a chipped one hobbles off into the pile of rubble ahead.

This is so great. It is a excellent story.

  ·  7 years ago Reveal Comment

Short but very emotional piece. Love how you breath life into each words.

Me gusta ese toque lugubre pero sutil

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Excelente, me encanto sigue así te felicito

para los amantes de los legendarios vinilos!, lindo, nostálgico y triste

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Excellent post beautiful

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Very nicely written!! The image below the text is chosen correctly in my opinion. There is something fascinatingly beautiful in the picture of the player and the vinyl record. After reading remains a pleasant feeling, as the aftertaste of a good and a little tart wine.