I enjoyed the writing. You've set the story in a dystopian society well. It did reminded me a little of Fahrenheit 451.
RE: A Chapter from my Novel in Progress / Impressions and advice welcomed!!
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A Chapter from my Novel in Progress / Impressions and advice welcomed!!
thank you @widdy :) I have to admit books like fahrenheit 451, 1984, the hunger games, and so many others I've read along the way definitely shape my writing and have a theme I want to explore myself in this book.
thanks again for taking the time to read and comment!
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