This is beautiful, Sir!
i absolutely love the way Lucia flirts and fawns over Drevin, and still manages to boost her Master's ego when He begins to doubt Himself.

Then the little hints of how Drevin has protected her in the years since the reader last saw them, and the way He goes from tenderly affectionate with her, to Alpha Male rage when it comes to protecting her, honestly make me dissolve into a soaking wet little slavish mess. Drevin's love for her, as well as her absolute devotion to Him, both come through so clearly here, and i agree with Lucia: i feel sorry for whoever Drevin finds holding her captive when Drevin gets there.