Where am I? How did I get this deep into the forest? Did I black out? It’s getting cold and dark now. It must be just after sunset. I should probably find a good place to… Wait, what was that? It sounded like it came from over th… Oh no.
This is a fifty-word fictional story. It was written as part of this fifty-word short story challenge currently organized by @jayna. The prompt word this time is "forest". Please feel free to check out the other #fiftywords stories and join the challenge.
The photo above is just some random photo I took at the Erawan National Park in #Thailand.
Very nice, @adigitalife! I'm sorry I nearly forgot to comment on this one. I was traveling, and am still catching up. I like what you did with the protagonist's fear and confusion.
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No problem at all. Thanks!
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Nice suspense! The photo adds more mystery in it. It leaves a lot of possibilities.
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Thank you!
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Ah, the suspense is killing me! The unresolved conflict. Always a favourite for me. Great little story.
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Thanks! I'm enjoying this format. Hopefully it will also lead to me writing longer fictional pieces.
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Cliffhanger... (maybe literally?) Now we must fill in with our imagination, while waiting for more (perhaps?) on this! Like the fairy tale says, "Be Afraid..." Good piece, @adigitalife
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Thanks! I've taken a cue from some of the other stories I've read previously. Leave it up to the reader to imagine what happens next. :)
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I think you've nailed the secret , @adigitalife - in showbiz, the mantra is "leave 'em wanting more." Goes for storytelling too!
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This is amazing, thanks for sharing
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Thank you!
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Great!
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This happens to me and I wake-up from the dream. I hope its just a dream.
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Sometimes it's difficult to distinguish the dream world from the real world.
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Nature can be so beautiful
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It can be.
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Amazing narration style, i believe it is not necessary to stop yourself after 50 words, the way you were explaining you can write more and more. Hope to read some later ;)
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Thanks! The objective of this particular challenge is to write a story using only 50 words so in this case I had to stop at 50 words. But perhaps I will try to write longer stories later on. :)
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Oh,, now i understand :) looking forward to read some later :)
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I lack words but I think its amazing, good job
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Thank you!
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