Eyes Wide Shut (Steemit 50-word Story Contest Entry)

in fiftywords •  8 years ago 

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NO! Not a coach in sight
I can’t save her
I can’t show my face again
On the tracks he sat
The train, inching closer
A little boy, laughing in the background
Why didn’t he just take the train mommy?
He did honey, in the only way he knew how...

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Nice story @advent.

And yes, you got everything right

Great, thanks so much for letting me know. I'm looking forward to reading everyone else's stories as well!

Great story, I hope you win

Thank you!