This is my entry for @jayna's 50 word writing competition (usually run by @miniature-tiger). The prompt this week is mouse.
MOUSE
Aged cheddar is set on a delicate plate. An intruder, unable to resist the aroma, is struck on his head with a hard steel bar. Charles is reading in bed and hears the commotion. He says to his wife, it’s quite an efficient machine, I’ll bury the body come morning.
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A dramatical story of a young and inexperienced mouse...! short but efficient story to me..
Thank you for sharing my friend and have a nice day...
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Ya, the poor little guy never saw it coming.
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you are always very good in this matter.
I liked the story of the mouse! congratulations, dear friend
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Thanks you.
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Dark, and slightly twisted. Loved this one.
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Ya, a mouse trap is quite horrid, we have a live trap that has caught countless little critters.
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Oh, ouch!! Am I going to regret picking this prompt? :-)
Thanks for contributing your 50-word story!
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No problem, thanks for sponsoring.
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I feel bad for the mouse : P
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Ya poor little fella.
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Oh the mouse feel sorry... But is unavoidable. Love this one @beginningtoend.
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Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
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You are welcome sir
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Succinct and brutal. I love it.
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Thanks, I like the challenge of condensing a story down to 50 words.
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