High Zoo - A fifty word challenge short story

in fiftywords •  7 years ago  (edited)

The sound is deafening: hoots and hollers, roars and screeches.
The smells overpowering: pungent, sour, rotten, and musky.
The sights impressive: jumping, running, swinging, and bouncing.
There are neither cages, nor enclosures, but sometimes they would help as visitors often say: “Oh man, this high school is such a zoo!”


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This week's theme is 'Zoo'.
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I love your style, nice build up!

Nice one. I love when people can get some humor into the fiftywords, it's a talent in itself.