50 Word Story Contest Week #19 - Indoctrinating Abandon

in fiftywords •  7 years ago  (edited)

Schools-out-for-summer-schools-out-forever-Abandoned-School-Classroom.jpg

The student sat bewildered
Having received his grade
The teacher not content
With the effort that he made

Sir, I used my imagination
Son, that wasn't the task
Sir, I tried to be creative
Son, you missed the mark

Saddened by the indoctrinating tone
The student felt abandoned and alone


Written by @cupid

2017-07-08

Image Source: Abandoned School Classroom
I learnt about the #fiftywords contest here through the @literature-trail.

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Short but very relatable. Good job!

Thanks for your comment @xyzashu!

This one tugged at my heartstrings

Thank you for reading and your comment @creationofcare. It came from my heart...

<3

Very nice!

Thanks johnniec!

very good work

Thanks!

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