"The Road" a tiny tale in fiftywords for the #365daysofwriting challenge

in fiftywords •  7 years ago  (edited)
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So much story and setting packed into this. I'm envious of your skills (and imagination!)

Thanks @pocketmouse! Everyday when I look at the prompt I think I can't do it, and then I can. So have a go, and keep having a go! :)

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Yeaa!

Like the others wrote too, this again could be a longer story.
You do really have a good imagination...

Perhaps I could take your fifty-word stories and make them into longer stories...of course if you'd allow me first.

Thank you!

feel free to use them if you wish, even if I were to write a bigger story based on the same outline, I am sure it would come out very different

I like the picture you painted here! I was glad she looked warm lol

Yes, I think she found clothes too! :)

Another blurb for a longer story?

NOTES: “[encountered] no living [thing]. (The first word should be past tense and the last should not be plural.)

“She finds shelter and sometimes food in long abandoned buildings.” (the commas are grammatically superfluous in this sentence.

Thanks for reading, commenting and picking up the errors! :)

You’re welcome. And, I’m happy to help. We creatives have to look out for each other, eh?

I get a distinct "Fallout" feel when reading your tiny tale :) It almost makes me want to open the game and immerse myself in the apocalyptic world!

And once more; great minds think alike!! :D
(and ignore those who say "fools seldom differ"...)

I've never played Fallout, I'm not a gamer, but I've heard of it, of course! :)